Source:
Baird, Stephen L. "Offshore Oil Drilling: Buying Energy Independence or
Buying Time?." Technology Teacher 68.3 (2008): 13-17. Academic Search Premier.
EBSCO. Web. 22 June 2010.
Original
Wording: “The article claims that the
U.S. is a leader in safety technologies in the offshore oil industry to address
people's concerns over the environmental and safety issues related to offshore
drilling.”
Corrine’s
Paper: As a leader in safety technologies in the offshore oil industry, the
U.S. should address people’s concerns over the environmental and safety issues
related to offshore drilling (Baird, 13).